Your Turn

Sam read the following about using cell phones while driving:

Cellphones and Driving

In the United States over 260 million people subscribed to such wireless communication devices as cellphones as of June 2008, compared with approximately 4.3 million in 1990, according to the Cellular Telecommunications & Internet Association.

Many studies have shown that using hand-held cellphones while driving can constitute a hazardous distraction. However, the theory that hands-free sets are safer has been challenged by the findings of several studies. A study from researchers at the University of Utah, published in the summer 2006 issue of Human Factors, the quarterly journal of the Human Factors and Ergonomics Society, concludes that talking on a cellphone while driving is as dangerous as driving drunk, even if the phone is a hands-free model. An earlier study by researchers at the university found that motorists who talked on hands-free cellphones were 18 percent slower in braking and took 17 percent longer to regain the speed they lost when they braked.

Insurance Information Institute

http://www.iii.org/media/hottopics/insurance/cellphones/

And added this to his paper:

Cell phones are wireless communication devices used by hundreds of millions of Americans (Insurance Information Institute).

It is clear that use of cell phones while driving increases the likelihood of accidents. According to University of Utah research, it is as much of a danger as driving while intoxicated. And that even includes use of hands-free phones (Insurance Information Institute).

University of Utah research showed that cell phone users braked and accelerated inconsistently.

How did Sam do? You be the Judge!

1st paragraph

This information is considered common knowledge and does not need to have a citation.

2nd paragraph

This is a good paraphrase of the material. It restates the important points in new language and gives credit to both the University of Utah and cites the Insurance Information Institute.

3rd paragraph

This is not a good paraphrase. It doesn’t say that the research was about hands-free phones and it is incorrect in saying the important conclusion was inconsistency. It was the poor reaction times. It also just mentions the University of Utah without citing the information appeared on the Insurance Information Institute web site.

Your turn!

On your worksheet, follow the instructions for quoting, paraphrasing, and documenting your sources.

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